Why do people cheat?
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Well, I think people like to feel thrill.
In other words, when we were child, We learned that cheating is bad
So, we know we don’t have to cheating. But always bad thing is fun and thrill.
So, That’s the reason why people do and like cheat.
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Well, I think people like to feel thrill.
>> Well, I think people like to feel the thrill.
In other words, when we were child, We learned that cheating is bad
So, we know we don’t have to cheating.
>> In other words, as a child, we know that cheating is bad that is why we don\'t do it.
But always bad thing is fun and thrill.
>> But, doing bad things are always fun and thrilling.
So, That’s the reason why people do and like cheat.
>> That\'s the reason why people like to cheat.
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