Why do people end up being homeless?

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Here are my corrections for you:

When people has a lot of money, people use the money quickly until they doesn\'t have money. so they are being homeless. 

>> When people have a lot of money, they spend it quickly until they don\'t have any left.

so they are being homeless. 

>> So they become homeless.

We have to save our money when we have a lot of money.

>> CORRECT!