Why do people enjoy fishing, and what makes it different from other hobbies.
학생이 쓴 원문
The fishing is very slow and sleepy, many hobbies are very fast and exciting.
Fishing is very interesting hobbies.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jimmy!
This is your third revised composition from last week\'s homework. You can see the corrected version below. Enjoy the rest of your day!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Why do people enjoy fishing, and what makes it different from other hobbies?
The fishing is very slow and sleepy, many hobbies are very fast and exciting.
>>> Fishing feels slow and calm, but many other hobbies are fast and exciting.
>>> OR: Although fishing is calm and slow, it is still an interesting hobby.
Fishing is very interesting hobbies.
>>> Fishing is a very interesting hobby.
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