Why do people get sick?
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1. The germs outside go into your nose or mouth.
2. It\'s not hygienic.
3. Because our bodies are not resistant enough to respond appropriately
to external changes.
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1. The germs outside go into your nose or mouth.
>>> We get sick because we consume or inhale germs from outside.
2. It\'s not hygienic.
2. It\'s not hygienic.
>>> We\'ll get sick if we are not hygienic.
3. Because our bodies are not resistant enough to respond appropriately
to external changes.
3. Because our bodies are not resistant enough to respond appropriately
to external changes.
>>> It\'s because our body\'s not resistant enough to respond appropriately to external changes.
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