Why do people immigrate to other countries?

Hi Su ^^

With globalization the people who leave their country have been increasing.

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 There are plenty of reason of immigration, but the most reason why is fining a better place to live.

>>> There are plenty of reasons of immigration, and most of it is because of wanting to have a better living in a different country.

 Escape from war and competition, dream of fantasy world….

>>> Escape from war and competition, dreaming of a fantasy world.

In Korea, it is the question of the hour.

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One year ago, the group of Yemenite came to Korea to avoid civil war.

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 It was the first time to Korea suddenly to counter over the 500 Muslim personally.

>>> It was the first time Korea suddenly encounter over 500 Muslim personally.

 So there was controverse discuss between the people to reject them and accept them.

>>> So there was a controversy discussed between both parties to reject them and accept them.

 And more and more Korean would like to live other countries as the employment and housing trouble have been serious.

>>> And now Koreans would like to live in other countries as the employment and housing trouble have been serious.

 To avoid the competition, people are finding new habitat out of state.

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