Why do people in Korea give importance to studying the English language?
학생이 쓴 원문
In korea, TOEIC scores are required in the hiring process of the company.
When judging a person\'s ability, English ability is the reference point.
So the second language of korea is English.
I think the problem is that people are not good at real conversation is English.
This point must be corrected in the future.
강사 첨삭
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>>In Korea, TOEIC scores are required in the hiring process of the company.
When judging a person\'s ability, English ability is the reference point.
>>CORRECT
So the second language of korea is English.
>>So, the second language of Korea is English.
OR>>So, the second most important language in Korea is English.
I think the problem is that people are not good at real conversation is English.
>>I think the problem is that people are not good at real conversations in English.
This point must be corrected in the future.
>>CORRECT
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