Why do people need friends? What can happen if a person has no friends?
학생이 쓴 원문
It is said that man is a social animal. That means that a person is constantly present in relation to others.
I think that I don\'t need many friends. Because A true friend stays with me even when i\'m sad when I\'m in trouble.
So it will be hard to overcome that time.
Actually , I am happy to be alone when I am happy.
Of course I have to be someone\'s true friend.
강사 첨삭
Hi Miss [이름]! Thank you for sending in your homework. I agree with your opinion. Humans definitely need others to survive. ~~T.Dee
It is said that man is a social animal.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: According to Aristotle, a man is a social animal.
That means that a person is constantly present in relation to others.
>>It means that a person needs to have a constant relation to others.
I think that I don\'t need many friends.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: I don\'t think that I need many friends.
Because A true friend stays with me even when i\'m sad when I\'m in trouble.
>>It is because, for me, a true friend stays with me even when I\'m sad when I\'m in trouble.
>>OR: (combine the sentences to make proper use of the conjunction \"because\" ) I don\'t think that I need many friends because a true friend stays with me even when I\'m sad when I\'m in trouble.
So it will be hard to overcome that time.>>It will be hard to overcome the situation during those times.
Actually , I am happy to be alone when I am happy.
Actually , I am happy to be alone when I am happy.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: Actually, I don\'t worry about being alone when I am happy.
Of course I have to be someone\'s true friend.
>>Of course, I also have to be someone\'s true friend.
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