Why do people often talk about the weather as a way to start conversations.
학생이 쓴 원문
I think many peole starting weather,weather is greating for working.
My hometown weather is sunny in morning.
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Hi Jimmy!
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Cheers,
Jean~~
Why do people often talk about the weather as a way to start conversations?
I think many peole starting weather,weather is greating for working.
>>> I think many people start conversations by talking about the weather. It’s often used as a greeting at work.
My hometown weather is sunny in morning.
>>> In my hometown, the weather is usually sunny in the morning.
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