Why do people often want more money, no matter how much they have got? Why do you think people are n
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Good afternoon Sir [이름]!
It is cloudy and cold in my city today.
It is because of the typhoon.
Yes, you are definitely right.
Rich people want more because they want to prove something.
And it makes them richer. How about average or poor people?
Why don\'t you think their lives are improving? You already heard about the poverty here in Philippines.
I am sure that you already noticed that it is really difficult to have a good life.
Can you tell me about your ideas in class?
Teacher Nina
It is a good question.
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Why do already rich people want more money?
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>> Why do rich people want more wealth?
Looking at the conglomerates or people who are millionaires, they do not seem to be satisfied with staying inactive and doing nothing.
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They usually keep investing or expanding their business.
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It is probably because they want to feel that they are alive rather than making money.
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Man by nature is a social animal.
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A human needs a job to work, to get socialized, and to be recognized by other people.
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By having a job or running a business, you will have a title such as chairman, president, CEO, and so on.
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The title and your position will make you be noticed and recognized by others.
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>> Your title and position will make you be noticed and recognized.
You sometimes will be respected by many people if you set a good example.
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Such a title or recognition by others could be a motive for some rich people to continuously pursue more fortune.
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There are some people who only focus on making more money.
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It is because they indulge in greed.
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Their goal is to make money only, not to spend money well.
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