why do people say laughter is the best medcine?

2013-02-20 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

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Today I'm going to approach the topic medical point of view. According to the reaserch, the brain can not recognize which is true or lie about you say it or think about it. I'm not sure that you do this or not, It's really hard to smile and say negative at the same time. So,If you try to smile regardless of your situations, your brain start to secrete hormone that is good for your health. And I think that you need to practice to smile. Why don't you start the day with a loud laugh?

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon! Are you smiling today?^^ This is actually a good lesson for me. Thank you so much for sharing what you have in mind about this topic. Well, if you don\'t mind, I am more than willing to share what I have in mind regarding this matter in class. Perhaps, we can have a good talk while laughing, all at the same time. Can\'t wait to talk to you! _T.Alice^^ Today I\'m going to approach the topic medical point of view.>>Today, I\'m going to approach the topic froma medical point of view.According to the reaserch, the brain can not recognize which is true or lie about you say it or think about it.>>According to some researches, the brain cannot recognize which is true and which is a lie among all the things that you say or think about.I\'m not sure that you do this or not, It\'s really hard to smile and say negative at the same time.>> I\'m not sure if you do this or not because it\'s really hard to smile and say negative things at the same time.So,If you try to smile regardless of your situations, your brain start to secrete hormone that is good for your health.>>So it you try to smile regardless of the situation you are in, your brain starts to secrete a hormone that is good for your health. And I think that you need to practice to smile.>>And I think you need to practice how to smile.Why don\'t you start the day with a loud laugh? >>Correct OR >> Why don\'t you start the day with a resounding laugh?

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