Why do people say laughter is the best medicine?
학생이 쓴 원문
Laughter is exceedingly good for health.
The common sense has been proved by scientists.
When people laugh, their brain secretes a hormone, like dopamine.
The powerful hormone makes people happy and so that people forget the bad things.
And it changes our body healthier.
강사 첨삭
Hi Su ^^
Laughter is exceedingly good for health.
>>> correct
The common sense has been proved by scientists.
>>> Common sense has been proven by scientist.
When people laugh, their brain secretes a hormone, like dopamine.
>>> When people laugh, their brain secretes a hormone called dopamine.
The powerful hormone makes people happy and so that people forget the bad things.
>>> The powerful hormone makes people happy and so people forget bad things.
And it changes our body healthier.
>>> And it changes our body and makes it healthier.
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