Why do people say paughter is the best medicine?
학생이 쓴 원문
Because we laugh when we\'re happy.
When we\'re laughing we forget every thoughts of bad things.
I think laughter make people have possitive thoughts.
So, laughter is the best medicine.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
Because we laugh when we\'re happy.
>>CORRECT
When we\'re laughing we forget every thoughts of bad things.
>>CORRECT
I think laughter make people have possitive thoughts.
>> I think laughter make people have positive thoughts. (Spelling - positive)
So, laughter is the best medicine.
>>CORRECT
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