why do people spend their time in the club?
학생이 쓴 원문
Usually, I think they want to meet a new person.
one way to overcome boredom in everyday life?
especially weekends, club don\'t always have a seat.
Personally, I think the biggest reason is to listen music and dance.
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Usually, I think they want to meet a new person.
>>CORRECT
one way to overcome boredom in everyday life?
>>It can also be a one way to overcome boredom in every day life.
especially weekends, club don\'t always have a seat.
>>Especially weekends, clubs don\'t always have empty seats.
Personally, I think the biggest reason is to listen music and dance.
>>Personally, I think the biggest reason is to listen to music and dance along with it.
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