Why do people use SNS?
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Peoples use to communicate to other people.
We can get a good information. We can sell and buy something. Someone can earn big money through it.
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Peoples use to communicate to other people.
>> People use SNS to communicate with other people.
We can get a good information.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> We can get good pieces of information.
We can sell and buy something.
>> CORRECT!
Someone can earn big money through it.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> People can earn a big amount of money through it.
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