Why do people want to explore the space?
학생이 쓴 원문
Because meteorite will Earth and people will die.
They want to go to the other planet that don\'t have meteorite and have gravity.
So they wouldn\'t die.
People think there is money.
Maybe there will be silver in the moon.
I want to build city in the space.
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>>It is because meteorites will go to Earth and people might die.
They want to go to the other planet that don\'t have meteorite and have gravity.
They want to go to the other planet that don\'t have meteorite and have gravity.
>>They want to go to other planets that don\'t have meteorites and have gravity.
So they wouldn\'t die.
So they wouldn\'t die.
>>Correct.
>>OR: So people wouldn\'t die.
People think there is money.
People think there is money.
>>Correct.
Maybe there will be silver in the moon.
Maybe there will be silver in the moon.
>>Maybe there will be silver on the moon.
I want to build city he space.
I want to build city he space.
>>I want to build a city in space.
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