Why do reptiles have scales?
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to prevent dehydration in dry environments.And to protect against predators/abrasion. And Allow them to thrive on land. The scales Made of keratin form a tough, waterproof barrier that prevents moisture loss and safeguards against environmental damage.
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Jean~~
Why do reptiles have scales?
to prevent dehydration in dry environments.And to protect against predators/abrasion.
>>> This helps prevent dehydration in dry environments and also protects against predators and abrasion.
And Allow them to thrive on land.
>>> It allows them to thrive on land.
The scales Made of keratin form a tough, waterproof barrier that prevents moisture loss and safeguards against environmental damage.
>>> The scales made of keratin form a tough, waterproof barrier that prevents moisture loss and protects against environmental damage.
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