Why do so many people love traveling?
학생이 쓴 원문
Duing traveling, we usually go to a places that we haven\'t visted.
So, traveling can give us unique mood.
That\'s why many people love traveling.
강사 첨삭
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Duing traveling, we usually go to a places that we haven\'t visted.
>> While traveling, we usually go to places we haven\'t visited before.
So, traveling can give us unique mood.
>> Traveling can give us a unique feeling or mood.
That\'s why many people love traveling.
>> CORRECT
OR >> That\'s why many people love it.
>> While traveling, we usually go to places we haven\'t visited before.
So, traveling can give us unique mood.
>> Traveling can give us a unique feeling or mood.
That\'s why many people love traveling.
>> CORRECT
OR >> That\'s why many people love it.
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