Why do some cultures mourn death and others celebrate it? Are you afraid of death?
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I think the reason why cultures deal with death as different ways is meaning of death is different for them.
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Some cultures believe existence of life after death.
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And, they believe people will reincarnate as new birth.
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So, some culture celebrate death because they regard it as new beginning.
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Also, Remained people may make happy mood in order that people who died don’t feel sorry or lonely.
>>Also, Remained people may in happy mood in order that people who died don’t feel sorry or lonely.
On the other hand, mourning death is to express their sorrow and saudade for people who can’t meet anymore.
>>On the other hand, mourning death is to express their sorrow and sadness for people who can’t meet anymore.
People express every emotion about the dead even guilty through way to mourn death.
>>People express every emotion about the dead even guilt through way to mourn death.
After that, it is easier to accept death.
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Death is natural phenomenon.
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Everything die someday but it is hard to accept the death of close people.
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I sometimes think the day which my parents leave me.
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Even if it is just imagination, I always feel sad and tears fill my eyes.
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I wish that the day will come as slowly as possible.
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