Why do some people avoid watching or reading the news?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think some young people not interested economy and society.
because they are busy about working and playing.
and now a days, many people is personal.
and many fake news exist.
so it\'s hard to discern real news.
many broadcast is different political inclination.
so broadcast content is different each broadcasting station.
so we have to watch many different types of news.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
First, I have to say, you did a great job using new words in English. I am very impressed with how you answered this homework. I agree! There is a lot of news, and it\'s really difficult to discern which one is true, so we have to be really careful about what we believe.
- T. Caitlyn
I think some young people not interested economy and society.
>> I think some young people are not interested in the economy and society.
because they are busy about working and playing.
because they are busy about working and playing.
>> Because they are busy working and playing.
and now a days, many people is personal.
and now a days, many people is personal.
>> Nowadays, many people are private.
and many fake news exist.
and many fake news exist.
>> And a lot of fake news exists.
so it\'s hard to discern real news.
so it\'s hard to discern real news.
>> CORRECT
many broadcast is different political inclination.
many broadcast is different political inclination.
>> Many broadcasts have different political inclinations.
so broadcast content is different each broadcasting station.
so broadcast content is different each broadcasting station.
>> So broadcast content differs from station to station.
so we have to watch many different types of news.
so we have to watch many different types of news.
>> CORRECT
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.