Why do some people enjoy swim[이름]g while others are afraid of the water?
학생이 쓴 원문
As for me, I feel so free in the water.
I don\'t need to walk and feel the gravity in the water. And I can go up and down and any direction I want.
Another reason why I love swim[이름]g is the underwater scenery is really beautiful.
I sometimes feel like I am in another planet while swim[이름]g underwater.
But sometimes I swallow water or miss a breath, and it makes me feel panic.
But the happiness from swim[이름]g is bigger than the fear, I don\'t think I will quit swim[이름]g.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, [이름] [이름]!
That\'s a beautiful way to describe swim[이름]g. It sounds like you\'re flying instead of just moving through the water. I can understand why you love it so much. Even though it can be scary when you swallow water or miss a breath, it\'s great that the joy of swim[이름]g is stronger than the fear.
- Kristine ^^
As for me, I feel so free in the water.
>> Correct.
Or >> For me, being in the water feels incredibly freeing.
I don\'t need to walk and feel the gravity in the water. And I can go up and down and any direction I want.
I don\'t need to walk and feel the gravity in the water. And I can go up and down and any direction I want.
>> I don\'t have to walk, and I don\'t feel the effects of gravity in the water. I can move up, down, and in any direction I want.
Another reason why I love swim[이름]g is the underwater scenery is really beautiful.
Another reason why I love swim[이름]g is the underwater scenery is really beautiful.
>> Another reason I love swim[이름]g is that the underwater scenery is beautiful.
I sometimes feel like I am in another planet while swim[이름]g underwater.
I sometimes feel like I am in another planet while swim[이름]g underwater.
>> I sometimes feel like I\'m on another planet while swim[이름]g underwater.
But sometimes I swallow water or miss a breath, and it makes me feel panic.
But sometimes I swallow water or miss a breath, and it makes me feel panic.
>> But sometimes I swallow water or miss a breath, and it makes me panic.
But the happiness from swim[이름]g is bigger than the fear, I don\'t think I will quit swim[이름]g.
But the happiness from swim[이름]g is bigger than the fear, I don\'t think I will quit swim[이름]g.
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But the joy I get from swim[이름]g is greater than the fear, so I don\'t think I\'ll ever quit swim[이름]g.파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.