Why do some people have more difficulty than others when learning a language?
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
There are several reasons.
- CORRECT.
First, most people don\'t have a chance to speak english.
- First, most people don\'t have a chance to speak English.
I think it is most important thing. Because more speaking is makes a good speaker.
- I think it is the most important thing. Because more speaking makes a good speaker.
So, making a foreigner friend is very important. But it\'s so difficult in korea.
- So, making a foreign friend is very important. But it\'s so difficult in Korea.
Second, korean don\'t have a enough time to study English. Because they are working in the company for long times.
- Second, Koreans don\'t have enough time to study English. Because they have been working for the company for a long time.
Studying English is too hard but if you get a good English certificate, Company give a advantage for promotion.
- Studying English is too hard, but if you get a good English certificate, the company will give you an advantage for promotion.
That\'s why i study English.
- That\'s why I study English.
I have to try exam \"OPIC\' this year and I must get a IM Grade.
- I have to try the exam \"OPIC\' this year, and I must get an IM grade.
That\'s my goal this year.
- CORRECT.
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