Why do some people make wishes when they see a rainbow?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the rainbows see the make wishes is lie because It is makes people rumors.
So makes wishes see the rainbow is the lie.
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Why do some people make wishes when they see a rainbow?
I think the rainbows see the make wishes is lie because It is makes people rumors.
>>> People say you can make a wish when you see a rainbow, but I think that’s just a rumor.
So makes wishes see the rainbow is the lie.
>>> So, making wishes when you see a rainbow is not true.
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