Why do we believe violence is so prevalent in today\'s society and what can we do about it?

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I don\'t think that the violence is so prevalent today. 

>> I don\'t think that violence is so prevalent nowadays. 

Actually, in Korean, this situation has turned more decreasing than before.

>> Actually, in Korea, this situation has decreased over the years.

In the past, all of the rules of the nation were not hard.

>> CORRECT

OR>> In the past, the laws aren\'t that strict.

For example, the government made the rules by themselves.

>> CORRECT

in that reason, government was the national owner.

>> For that reason, the government was the most powerful.

So many Korean people were used to fight a lot with the government.

>> Therefore, many Koreans used to fight a lot with the government.

OR>> Therefore, many Koreans protested against the government.

However, nowadays, thanks to our ancestors the owner of the nation has changed.

>> CORRECT

Now we can make the rule by asking to member of the national assembly.

>> Now we can help make laws through the representation of the national assembly.