Why do we dream? What is the purpose of them?
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t have any definitive answers. I have no idea that dream has any purpose because don\'t know what sorts of dream I\'m going to dream while I\'m sleeping. Dream is mysterious thing that I have no idea to explain why do we dream.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, [이름]!^^
I appreciate your effort in answering your homework. Some say dreams give us signals or warnings, but it\'s just theories. They motivate, inspire, improve and help you in achieving any goal that you want to achieve but that depends if you can remember your dreams. ^_^
I have no idea that dream has any purpose because don\'t know what sorts of dream I\'m going to dream while I\'m sleeping.
>>>I have no idea that a dream has any purpose because I don\'t know what sorts of dream I have while I\'m sleeping.
Dream is mysterious thing that I have no idea to explain why do we dream.
>>>Dream is a mysterious thing that I have no idea how to explain why do we dream.
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