Why do we forget dreams so quickly?
학생이 쓴 원문
Because I think our brain is don\'t need to remember dreams because it is useless things. In the internet, the reason of we forget dreams so quickly is we don\'t dreaming a lot. So when we dreamed, we can remember that by writing dream diary.
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Hi, Daisy!
Thank you for sending me your composition. Great job!
~Teacher Erin
Because I think our brain is don\'t need to remember dreams because it is useless things.
>>Our brain doesn\'t need to remember dreams because it\'s useless things.
In the internet,
>>On the internet,
the reason of we forget dreams so quickly is we don\'t dreaming a lot.
>>one reason for forgetting our dream is we don\'t dream a lot.
So when we dreamed, we can remember that by writing dream diary.
>>So when we\'re dreaming, we can remember that by writing a dream diary.
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