Why do we have to study?

2015-12-14 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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My mum said we need to study because we can get the jobs that we want and go to good universitiy. Studying for hours and hours is really hard for me because I get tired and bored. However if I want go to the univresitiy and get the job that I want I must study. Last week I hadmy exams and the score was pretty good. So I want to ask mum that I want nintendo but mum said no. I was very sad. Mum you are so bad.

강사 첨삭

Hi MIN!   Don\'t say your mom is bad. She is actually right. She only wants the best for you and your sister. Mayve she thought that giving you a nintendo is not a good idea. It might be a reason for you to get distracted from studying. Try to understand your mom. Life is really hard if you are not equipped with education and skills. Competition for jobs is very high, very tough. Just concentrate on your studies. You have your your bike and your tablet if you feel bored, am I right?^_- I\'ll see you in class.   =T. Mayleen=     My mum said we need to study because we can get the jobs that we want and go to good universitiy. >> My mom said we need to study well so we can enter a good university and eventually get a good job.   Studying for hours and hours is really hard for me because I get tired and bored. >> Studying for hours is really hard for me because I get bored and tired.   However if I want go to the univresitiy and get the job that I want I must study. >> However, I want to go to a nice university and get a good job so I must study.   Last week I hadmy exams and the score was pretty good. >> Last week, I had my final exams and I got pretty good scores.   So I want to ask mum that I want nintendo but mum said no. >> So I told my mom that I want a nintendo but she said no.   I was very sad. >> CORRECT OR: I felt so sad.   Mum you are so bad. >> Mom is so bad.

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