Why do we need to greet the people around us?

2023-04-04 · 첨삭 강사 Hanna

학생이 쓴 원문

At office I greet my pioneer because I want to let them know that I am in my chair. At home I greet my husband because I want to make him feel that I care of him. At cafe of restuarent I greet the worker because I want to be polite. When I climb a mountain I greet the strangers because I want to deliver good energy and happy emotion to them.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for your homework, Jessica!
Keep expressing your thoughts and you\'ll be great in English!
-Hanna ^^
At office I greet my pioneer because I want to let them know that I am in my chair.
>>At the office, I greet my pioneer because I want to let them know that I am in my chair.
At home I greet my husband because I want to make him feel that I care of him.
>>At home, I greet my husband because I want to make him feel that I care for him.
At cafe of restuarent I greet the worker because I want to be polite.
>>At the cafe or restaurant, I greet the workers because I want to be polite.
When I climb a mountain I greet the strangers because I want to deliver good energy and happy emotion to them.
>>When I climb a mountain, I greet the strangers because I want to give them a positive energy and happy mood.

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