Why do we need to have contests or competitions?
학생이 쓴 원문
It’s because it makes us grow up.
Grading people is not good.
But it motivates to grow up.
So I think contests and competitions are good for us.
And I think we should compete to develop.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] Hu!
Thank you for trying your very best this week. You are always so consistent! See you next week. ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>CORRECT!
Grading people is not good.
Grading people is not good.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: Ranking people is not good.
But it motivates to grow up.
But it motivates to grow up.
>>But it motivates us to grow up.
So I think contests and competitions are good for us.
So I think contests and competitions are good for us.
>>CORRECT!
And I think we should compete to develop.
And I think we should compete to develop.
>>CORRECT!
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