why do we need to study English?

2023-09-27 · 첨삭 강사 Chammy

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Because we have many chance to talk with foreigners who have their own languages. Even though their mother language is not English, they can speak a word at least in English. We can communicate each other everywhere. Especially in my case , many foreigners visit our hotel. One day I saw a Russian, and he took orders in English. That is why we need to study English.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Han! Thank you for submitting your composition here. I appreciate your input, and I think that knowing how to communicate in English is advantageous, especially if you work in the hotel industry. So, I hope you can keep improving your known vocabulary.

~T.Chammy^^


Because we have many chance to talk with foreigners who have their own languages.

>>Because we have many chances to talk with foreigners who have their own languages.
Even though their mother language is not English, they can speak a word at least in English.

>>Correct
We can communicate each other everywhere.

>>We can communicate with each other everywhere.
Especially in my case, many foreigners visit our hotel.

>>Correct
One day I saw a Russian, and he took orders in English.

>>Correct

Or

>> One day I saw a Russian, and he placed his orders in English.
That is why we need to study English.

>>Correct


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