Why do we sometimes need to interact with our colleagues?
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I think it is necessary because of the conversation. During work at the company, we have to talk about the work. As we talk with colleagues, it helps us to choice better. Also, it helps us to think much better.
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Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some things to take note of:
1. I think it is necessary because of the conversation.
>>I think it is necessary because of the conversation. (This is grammatically correct, but it will need additional context.)
OR>>I think it is necessary because of the conversations that could help us build relationships with others.
2. During work at the company, we have to talk about the work.
>>During work at the company, we have to talk about work.
3. As we talk with colleagues, it helps us to choice better.
>>As we talk with colleagues, it helps us to choose better.
4. Also, it helps us to think much better.
>>CORRECT!
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