Why do we use the computer?
학생이 쓴 원문
We use computer and laptop.
Beacause It\'s useful.
And It can play games, watch Youtube and watch Disny+, Wavve and Coopang play.
And lastly I can play Teach Your Monster and Taza practics.
These are why we use a computer and laptop.
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Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Always do your best!
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We use computer and laptop.
>> We use computers and laptops.
Beacause It\'s useful.
>> That\'s because they are useful. [ please be careful of the spelling of the word \"BECAUSE\".]
And It can play games, watch Youtube and watch Disny+, Wavve and Coopang play.
>> We can play games, watch videos on YouTube, watch movies and drams on Disney+ and Wavve, and use Coupang for online shopping.
And lastly I can play Teach Your Monster and Taza practics.
>> CORRECT!
These are why we use a computer and laptop.
>> These are the reasons why we use a computer and a laptop.
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