Why do you buy one product over another?
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Do you buy a product when you shop? Or do you buy multiple products? Today, I decided to write about myself.
First of all, when I go shopping, I buy more one product. Because that's how you can use one thing longer and more efficiently.
강사 첨삭
Do you buy a product when you shop? Or do you buy multiple products?
Today, I decided to write about myself.
>>CORRECT
First of all, when I go shopping, I buy more one product.
>>First of all, when I go shopping, I buy more than one product.
Because that\'s how you can use one thing longer and more efficiently.
>>CORRECT
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