Why do you go to university?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that University education has both perspectives.
That is what it can be to get better jobs and benefit for individuals and society.
Of course, it can vary depending on someone\'s situations, beliefs, and values.
Even though we’ve tried to hard, if we don\'t get a good job, somebody will say that we didn’t get he effects of education.
Therefore we should have benefits of individuals and society through university education, which also is one of the important functions of university education.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ha!
I look forward to our discussion.
These are really good sentences you made.
However, they are too general.
I need more explanation so I would ask you more questions in class.
I will talk to you soon.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I think that University education has both perspectives.
>> I think that university education has both perspectives.
That is what it can be to get better jobs and benefit for individuals and society.
That is what it can be to get better jobs and benefit for individuals and society.
>> That is what it can be to get better jobs and benefits for individuals and society.
Of course, it can vary depending on someone\'s situations, beliefs, and values.
Of course, it can vary depending on someone\'s situations, beliefs, and values.
>> Of course, it can vary depending on someone\'s situation, beliefs, and values.
Even though we’ve tried to hard, if we don\'t get a good job, somebody will say that we didn’t get he effects of education.
Even though we’ve tried to hard, if we don\'t get a good job, somebody will say that we didn’t get he effects of education.
>> Even though we’ve tried hard, if we don\'t get a good job, somebody will say that we didn’t get the effects of education.
Therefore we should have benefits of individuals and society through university education, which also is one of the important functions of university education.
Therefore we should have benefits of individuals and society through university education, which also is one of the important functions of university education.
>> Correct
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