Why do you like about Britney Spears?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like the tone when she sings and performance
she reached the top star position and In contrast she experienced bottom.
she was go through struggles?
especially, In korea, her influence was great 20 years ago.
First of all, when I hear her songs, feel so good. thank you.
강사 첨삭
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I like the tone when she sings and performance
>>I like the tone when she sings and performs.
she reached the top star position and In contrast she experienced bottom.
>>She reached the top star position but she also experienced being at the bottom.
she was go through struggles?
>>She is going through stuggles.
especially, In korea, her influence was great 20 years ago.
>>Especially in Korea, her influence was great 20 years ago.
First of all, when I hear her songs, feel so good. thank you.
>>First of all, when I hear her songs, I feel so good. Thank you.
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