Why do you like living in the city?
학생이 쓴 원문
There are many facilities in the city such as hospitals, markets and welfare facilities. It is convenient to visit term there. In detail, public transportaions have developed in the city. So, It makes me comfortable to go anywhere easily.Therefore, I like to live in the city.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Thank you!
Here are my corrections:
There are many facilities in the city such as hospitals, markets and welfare facilities.
>>> CORRECT
It is convenient to visit term there.
>>> It\'s convenient to visit different places.
In detail, public transportaions have developed in the city.
>>> In detail, public transportation\'s have developed in the city.
So, It makes me comfortable to go anywhere easily.
>>> CORRECT
Therefore, I like to live in the city.
>>> CORRECT
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