Why do you like to have daughters instead of sons?

2021-02-23 · 첨삭 강사 Sheila

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I like to have daughters. Because After a lot of time, daughters remain around mother. sons are get married and leave familly. I like my wife. so eventually I like to have daughters.

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I like to have daughters.
>>CORRECT

Because After a lot of time, daughters remain around mother.
>>Because, after a long time, daughters remain around their mother.

sons are get married and leave familly.
>>Sons get married and leave the family.

I like my wife. so eventually I like to have daughters.
>>CORRECT

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