Why do you prefer white wine over red wine?
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i really enjoy to drink white wine
because i like a sea food
some white wine goes well with the sea food
and especially kind of favorite white wine is sauvignon blanc which taste little be fruite
i have been memorable experience in new zealand which is related sauvignon blanc
i have been visited the new zealand last years where is most famous country with sauvignon blanc
that time i really drank the wine a lot but i had plan very next day
i felt serious hangover but i don\'t want mass up my travel i just held my hangover
but other people thought that i had an upset stomach so i pretended be sick person lol
강사 첨삭
Hi, Bella^^
You must really love white wine.
It seems like it is even connected with memorable travel experience that you had.
_T. SHAY^^
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i really enjoy to drink white wine because i like a sea food***
>>I really enjoy drinking white wine because I like seafood.
some white wine goes well with the sea food
some white wine goes well with the sea food
>>Some white wine go well with seafood.
and especially kind of favorite white wine is sauvignon blanc which taste little be fruite
and especially kind of favorite white wine is sauvignon blanc which taste little be fruite
>>My favorite kind of white wine is sauvignon blanc which tastes a little bit fruity.
i have been memorable experience in new zealand which is related sauvignon blanc
>>I have a memorable experience in New Zealand which is related with sauvignon blanc.
i have been visited the new zealand last years where is most famous country with sauvignon blanc
i have been visited the new zealand last years where is most famous country with sauvignon blanc
>>Last year, I visited New Zealand - the most famous country for sauvignon blanc.
OR:
>>Last year, I visited New Zealand - a country known for sauvignon blanc.
that time i really drank the wine a lot but i had plan very next day
OR:
>>Last year, I visited New Zealand - a country known for sauvignon blanc.
that time i really drank the wine a lot but i had plan very next day
>>That time, I really drank a lot of wine even though I had a plan the very next day.
i felt serious hangover but i don\'t want mass up my travel
i felt serious hangover but i don\'t want mass up my travel
>>I had a serious hangover, but I didn\'t want to mess up my trip.
i just held my hangover but other people thought that i had an upset stomach so i pretended be sick person lol
i just held my hangover but other people thought that i had an upset stomach so i pretended be sick person lol
>>I just endured my hangover. But other people thought that I had an upset stomach, so I pretended to be sick.
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