Why do you study English? (2)

2013-07-25 · 첨삭 강사 Rowena

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I started studying English from last year because I’d like to go to England to study. It is important reason to start studying English again to me. These days, I try to enjoy conversation, writing and listening together for smooth communication. Maybe, I think you have a reason to study English like employment preparation, overseas trip, following other persons and self-improvement. So, let me ask you some questions. First question is my subject. Why do you study English? Second, are you interested in English?

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]! Thanks so much for this composition of yours. Well, I do love English that\'s why I became your teacher. ( haha ) And of course I studied this language for a better career and for a better communication. Anyway, enjoy the rest of the day. See you in class. Teacher Jane. I started studying English from last year because I’d like to go to England to study. >> I have started studying English since last year because I\'d like to go to England to study. It is important reason to start studying English again to me. >>It is an important reason to start studying English again for me. OR >> It is an important reason for me to study English again. These days, I try to enjoy conversation, writing and listening together for smooth communication. >> These days, I\'m trying to enjoy conversation, writing and listening for a smooth conversation.Maybe, I think you have a reason to study English like employment preparation, overseas trip, following other persons and self-improvement. >>correct!So, let me ask you some questions. >>correct!First question is my subject. >> My first question is the first question you gave. Why do you study English? >> correct!Second, are you interested in English? >>correct!  

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