Why do you study English?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was young, I studied English because my parents made me studying English obligatorily. They said that if I learned English completely, I could enter in college or many company in future. Of course, I agree about that, I have different reasons I studying English.
First, I want to talk in English fluently when I go to travel to the other country. If I speak English smoothly,I could talk about various title of conversation with foreigner.
Finally, my second reason is similar with my parents actually. I need to prepare OPIC speaking test for my future. So, I need to study hard to get high score in OPIC speaking test.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]! ^_^
Thank you for writing an essay for today.
I loved reading about the reasons why you are motivated to study English.
Let\'s work together to make sure that you achieve your goals.
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~Teacher Charry
When I was young, I studied English because my parents made me studying English obligatorily.
>> When I was young, I studied English because my parents obliged me to study English.
They said that if I learned English completely, I could enter in college or many company in future.
>> They said that if I learned and mastered English, I could enter in the berst college or many companies in the future.
Of course, I agree about that, I have different reasons I studying English.
>> Of course, I agree about that, but I have different reasons for studying English.
First, I want to talk in English fluently when I go to travel to the other country.
First, I want to talk in English fluently when I go to travel to the other country.
>> First, I want to talk in English fluently when I travel to another country.
If I speak English smoothly,I could talk about various title of conversation with foreigner.
>> [Do you mean]: If I speak English well, I could talk about various topics for conversation with a foreigner.
Finally, my second reason is similar with my parents actually.
Finally, my second reason is similar with my parents actually.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Finally, my second reason is actually similar with my parents.
I need to prepare OPIC speaking test for my future.
>> I need to prepare for my OPIC speaking test in the future.
So, I need to study hard to get high score in OPIC speaking test.
>> So, I need to study hard to get a high score in the OPIC speaking test.
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