Why do you think a lot of people are hooked on using the social media network?
학생이 쓴 원문
SNS is a quite useful tool to connect anyone through all over the world. Without face to face meeting, we can talk each other and share informations. Many people want to reveal themselves and recognize from others.
강사 첨삭
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~~Teacher Kate
>>SNS is quite a useful tool in connecting people all over the world.
2. Without face to face meeting, we can talk each other and share informations.
>>Even without meeting face to face , we can talk each other and share information.
3. Many people want to reveal themselves and recognize from others.
>>Many people want to reveal themselves and gain recognition from others as well.
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