Why do you think a lot of people love traveling?
학생이 쓴 원문
Because, many people are to busy all the time.
They have to many working and many meet people of the business relationship.
They don’t want to care about anything.
They seem to like to travel to refresh in a new place
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Ji Ae!
Because, many people are to busy all the time.
>>> Because, many people are too busy all the time.
They have to many working and many meet people of the business relationship.
>>> They have to do a lot of work and meet many people for business relationships.
They don’t want to care about anything.
>>> correct
They seem to like to travel to refresh in a new place.
They seem to like to travel to refresh in a new place.
>>> correct
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