Why do you think apologizing is important in relationships?
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I think an apology is an admission of a mistake. Admitting a mistake and not repeating it is the core of interpersonal relationships.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for sharing your thoughts, [이름]!
You\'re absolutely right! Apologies, when sincere, not only show accountability but also strengthen trust and communication in relationships. The real value lies in learning from mistakes and making a conscious effort to avoid them in the future. It’s key to building lasting connections.
~Kelly
I think an apology is an admission of a mistake. >> Correct
OR:
>> I believe that offering an apology acknowledges a mistake.
Admitting a mistake and not repeating it is the core of interpersonal relationships.
>> Correct
OR:
>> Recognizing errors and ensuring they are not repeated forms the foundation of healthy interpersonal relationships.
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