Why do you think are children addicted to smart phones and computer games?

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These days a donble income couple is increasing in korea.

>> These days, a double- income couple is increasing in Korea.

 So they can\'t take care of their children.

>> CORRECT!

 It is serious issue in korea.

>> It is a serious issue in Korea.

 If children\'s parents is working, they left alone.

>> If the children\'s parents are always working, they will always be left alone.

 So they using smartphone and computer games.

>> So the use smartphones and play computer games.

 I think that lots of korea parents need to restrict the children\'s using time.

>> I think that lots of Korean parents need to restrict their children\'s usage time.

 
 If the children\'s parents is not rule, the children consistly playing computer games and using smart phones.

>> If the children\'s parents don\'t make rules about restrictions, the children will consistently keep playing computer games and using their smart phones.