Why do you think body language is important?

2025-02-21 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

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I think body language is important. First of all, it is a way of communication. I can communicate with people more effectively. Like using [이름]ds to concentrate or to express an additional explanation. It is more useful for explainer like a teacher. Second, We can communicate people who can\'t listen. There is a beautiful sign that is called sign language. I want a c[이름]ce to learn about sign language.

강사 첨삭

Hello Nicole!
What a nice insight on body language and yes, as a teacher, it is very important for us. See you next week! ^^
~~Teacher Kate 

I think body language is important.
>>CORRECT!
First of all, it is a way of communication.
>>CORRECT!
I can communicate with people more effectively. Like using [이름]ds to concentrate or to express an additional explanation.
>>I can communicate with people more effectively, like using [이름]d gestures to emphasize a point or provide additional explanation.
It is more useful for explainer like a teacher.
>>It is especially useful for explainers, such as teachers.
Second, We can communicate people who can\'t listen.
>>Second, we can communicate with people who can\'t hear.
There is a beautiful sign that is called sign language.
>>There is a beautiful language called sign language.
I want a c[이름]ce to learn about sign language.
>>I would love to have a c[이름]ce to learn it.

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