Why do you think China and all other third-world countries are banning the use of single-use plastic
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It is natural decision because these countries are damaged by plastic waste.
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By plastic waste, many environment problems are occurred in the world.
>> By plastic waste, many environment problems occurred in the world.
I think that developed countries usually produce many wastes.
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But, although the third world countries produce waste less than developed countries, they have suffered bigger damage.
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Because they don\'t have capability to solve the problem.
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For example, developed countries can recycle plastic or other waste by energy but it is difficult to use other countries because it need a lot of money and high technology.
>>For example, developed countries can recycle plastic or other wastes by energy but it is difficult to other countries because it needs a lot of money and high technology.
I think banning the use of plastic is only method can be used by these countries.
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Also, China is the biggest country to make and throw away plastic.
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However, China also decided to reduce waste.
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So, China restrict to use single-use plastic and ban to import waste.
>> So, China restricted to use single-use plastic and ban to import waste.
It affects other countries to export waste.
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Europe decided to regulate using plastic.
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I think it was affected a little by environment policy of China.
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