Why do you think couples do not have children in your country nowadays?
학생이 쓴 원문
Why do you think couples do not have children in your country nowadays?
Because people’s life changed. Mother should work and our expense also higher than before.
And people wants to enjoy theirs life and get better so they can not care many children.
강사 첨삭
A lovely day Mun!
I have heard this for one too many times as reason why people in your country choose not to have many children. Nonetheless, I am sure that times change and they might think otherwise. So, thank you for answering your homework answer. See you in class!
-T. Donna =)
>> Because people’s life changed, mothers should work and their expenses are also higher than before.
And people wants to enjoy theirs life and get better so they can not care many children.
>> And also, people want to enjoy their lives and get better so they can not care for many children.
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