Why do you think culture is important?
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Culture is made by climate, local resources and the life style of the local people. Korea has an Event which is [이름]-jang. it is that korean make lots of [이름]-chi in end of automn to have it during winter season. It is one of the good example to show our culture. It\'s because Korea has four seasons. Korea is peninsula, so Korea is easy to get salt. Korean like eatting vegitbles.If you know our culture, you can understand Korea easier.
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Culture is made by climate, local resources and the life style of the local people.
>> CORRECT!Korea has an Event which is [이름]-jang.
>> Korea has an event which is [이름]-jang.
it is that korean make lots of [이름]-chi in end of automn to have it during winter season.
>> It is when Koreans make lots of [이름]-chi at the end of autumn to have it during winter season.
It is one of the good example to show our culture.
>> CORRECT!It\'s because Korea has four seasons.
>> CORRECT!Korea is peninsula, so Korea is easy to get salt.
>> Korea is a peninsula, so Korea finds it easy to get salt.
Korean like eatting vegitbles.
>> Koreans like eating vegetables.
If you know our culture, you can understand Korea easier.
>> CORRECT!
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