Why do you think divorce rate is increasing?
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Major reason for increasing divorce rate is lack of understanding about difference in personality and values. Other factors can be adultery, hardships of life, family violence, blood relations of husband or wife, etc.
강사 첨삭
Hi Judy!
Sometimes, divorce just looks into all the differences from once all the common things two people share. This is the saddest and the most tragic part of it. When we no longer like to do compromise, we quit on our relationships.
Well, I hope this never happens to you, your family, or the people close to you.
Thank you for doing this homework. See you on Friday!
Good night!
-T. Donna =)
>> The major reason for increasing divorce rate is the lack of understanding about differences in personality and values.
Other factors can be adultery, hardships of life, family violence, blood relations of husband or wife, etc.
>> Correct!
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