Why do you think is it hard for people to accept the LGBT communities around the world? (in 5-7 sent

Hi [이름]!

Your composition is very factual. ^^

I like it very much.

While it is true that we should respect everyone regardless of their sexuality, people should also realize that respect is given to those who truly deserve it.

As the saying goes, \"Respect begets respect.\"

Let\'s talk more about this in class. :)

~~t. Ally

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These days I try to be open to the LGBT communities because I believe everyone should be respected.

>> CORRECT!

 As long as we want to be respected, we have to respect others, which means we have to be careful not to bother others.

>> CORRECT!

 I’ve heard that the queer festival has taken place for years in Korea. (I will put my opinion on only Korean LGBT communities.)

>> CORRECT!

 They should have used that festival as good chances to show the positive aspect of them, but they didn’t.

>> They should have used that festival as an opportunity to show the positive aspects of their community, but they didn\'t.

 They wore weird costumes and handed over pictures which contained promiscuous erotic activities.

>> CORRECT!

 They are losing supports from people and losing their places. (How foolish!)

>> They are losing support from the people and are losing their place in the society as well. (How foolish!)