Why do you think is it harder for old people to accept change?

2021-07-16 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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Why do you think is it harder for old people to accept change? As people get older, they have a fear of new things. They have to adapt the change and it is hard to learn new one. They are used to the old one and comfortable.

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Hi [이름]! ^^

To be honest, It isn’t hard for old people to change, if they want to. Many of them don’t want to because they like the routine that they have found for themselves after a lifetime of trial and error.

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As people get older, they have a fear of new things.
>> As people get order, they fear new things. 

They have to adapt the change and it is hard to learn new one.
>> They have to adapt to the changes and it is hard to learn them as well. 

They are used to the old one and comfortable.
>>They are used to their old doing and they feel comfortable with that. 

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